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Luke
cropped size 12.25" x 14"
Graphite pencil drawing on paper
Copyright 2009 David J. Vanderpool

NOTE: Im not pleased with the outcome of this drawing, therefore I will be drawing another pose to possibly use for the new drawing book.
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~chubyatyahoo Jan 28, 2009
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~paper2pencil Feb 8, 2009
I have two other photos to draw of Luke, but I think I'll hold off for awhile. It took me two attempts to get this completed.
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~I-Kiba-I Jan 28, 2009
I don't see it that bad, it's a good job indeed.
Now that is completed I can see clearly the pose, and man, that seems a strong press! I wouldn't like to be the one laying down there.
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~paper2pencil Jan 29, 2009
Thanks. I want to start a second drawing of him before I lose the desire to get it right.
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~FromDarkToLight Jan 28, 2009
perhaps the back round
it place's them against a wall of atmosphere that
may be competing with the main subject

the dark corners help to spotlight but at a cost
his cast shadow solidifies it
making it less vivid in nature

it is very impact full and descriptive of the energy and movement like a wave crashing from behind up again him

i like this dave
and wonder what vexes you about it
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~paper2pencil Jan 29, 2009
Thanks... I agree. I think its the background and the hands I dont like. It was a good start but the next one will be a work of art!
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~FromDarkToLight Jan 29, 2009
you make me want to do better myself
i need to give it more time
i know you will find the balance your looking for
till next time
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*Himmapaan Jan 28, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
Good luck with the new version - I look forward to seeing it. :)
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~Roxtarsime Jan 28, 2009
Another outstanding drawing David, well done!
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~paper2pencil Jan 28, 2009
Thanks. I just want to try one more time. Its just not right.. or maybe Im just tired of looking at it. :)
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